" Workshop Reflection"

Each member in my group gave me supportive and very helpful information towards my paper and writing.  Thank you!

Kendall: You need to change the topic towards bullying, or change the topic towards more my topic I I am trying to write about.

Abigail: I need to change or talk more about my topic. I need to find pictures on track for stereotypes in different social classes. You made really good points, but you need to find the positive and negative for a topic. Break it down and analyze the picture.

Andrew: Find an argument that contains the social class stereotypes. It doesn’t make sense, in way. Andrew also helped me find a new topic that was better for my understanding. I knew what I wanted to research just didn’t know how to put it!

2.  The most helpful piece of was about the way I was trying to explain my topic. I had really good view points of what I was trying to get across to the reader, but trying to put in terms with a picture and my topics was the most difficult. Thanks to each member in my group they helped me see a clear vision of what I really wanted to talk about so, after that I changed my topic for something that better suits my ability to write, read, and understand.

3. Really I didn’t get no information that was least helpful piece of advice; everything was very helpful and supportive. We all listen, and give each other helpful advice to better our writing. IF we didn’t give each other supportive helpful advice then it wouldn’t be a workshop ?  So everything was helpful to me nothing was least helpful. They all even built my courage to come up to the teacher, to change my topic that better helped me understand what I was doing.

4. My plans for revision are to sit down and take a couple days to work on this. I don’t want to finish this in a couple of hours and say I’m done. I want to really have patience with my writing, which I don’t have at all and take my time. I really want to understand fully not just a little bit of what my topic is going to be about, as well as my pictures. I want to correct my mistakes with grammar. I want to write this paper with very good detail so people can see my points I’m trying to make across to the reader.