"Exploratory Proposal- Workshop Reflection"

1.       I received great advice from the members of my group :

ABBY: Told me to connect my questions more and combine the sentences together, and also add more commas. Also told me it was conversational. I had really good questions just needed to connect the pieces together more.

KENDALL: Told me something’s that would sound better to a reader instead of just saying rich but words to back it up like rich family.  It was good. I have to connect my pieces together.

ANDREW: Told me not much, but I think something about my grammar and structure of how I wrote the paper.

2.       I would say the most helpful piece of advice that helped me was knowing I was on the right track I just needed to connect my articles and sentences together as one thought instead of asking questions that pop in my head as I was reading the articles. Hearing I had good questions helped me feel proud of myself. Also some of my sentences didn’t make sense either.

3.       I would say I was confused a little when I was told to add more words and that the paper was conversational.  I really didn’t know what that meant?  Other than that all the feedback I receieved was helpful!

4.       My plans for revision is to first re read my paper to see if anything new pops out at me that I see just doesn’t make sense. Then I am going to rearrange some sentences, correct my grammar, add commas when necessary, and also take away some questions or details that just don’t belong in my paper.