1. The
advice I received from each member in my group would be:
·
Andrew: He said that I the main argument since I
am still confused could just be Is schools killing creativity. He gave me example
of his friend that was writing a paper so it helped me visualize a main strong argument
for my paper.
·
Kendall: Told me some suggestions about focusing
on one main subject for my paper like she did with her paper. I wrote down some
sources she stated to us during workshop which has helped me also.
·
Abigail: She has said I did a good job, just need
to improve my paper with some more details, and cut it out so it doesn’t look
so choppy. I need to add on to my summary more to explain my argument stronger.
2. I
would say Andrews’s advice was the most helpful. But then again I would say everyone’s
information is helpful because they all speak as a group to give advice on criteria’s
I need to fix in my paper.
3. Everyone
in the group gave helpful advice, I wouldn’t say any information I am giving is
least helpful. I don’t even like this question because if I didn’t have feedback
that was helpful, I wouldn’t agree and take that into consideration to fix,
while working on my paper.
4. My
plans for revision would to go back to each paper I have written so far and reread.
I am going to reread all of my papers to see if I need to take out or add any
information that could make my topic more specific. My arguments about creativity
in schools will stand strong, supporting the ideas I am talking about.
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