Self - Assessment Refelction

1.       My goals for writing this paper would be watching my grammar, having my sentences make sense, staying on topic, really describing what I’m analyzing in my pictures. I think I meet every goal. I took my time, and made sure I understood what I was talking about and describing in my pictures that relates to my topic. I even changed my topic to better understand who I was trying to get across to my readers from my view. I reread everything over, added and took our some things that I thought didn’t belong in my paper.

 

2.       I used the rest of time wisely. I reread this assignment over and over again until I understood what I was going to write about and have pictures to analyze about. I changed my topic to better fit what I was trying to say about schools which helped a lot to. I took advice from other people to get helpful hints as well. I did use class opportunities because I used the group work as advantages like my little teachers to steer me in my right direction. I even build up courage thanks to my peers to change my topic to make sense about what I was trying to say.

 

3.       I see my writing change because in my first draft I just rambled a bunch of words together trying to make sense. My topics were way off, and I have random off the wall things in my paper. I didn’t understand how my topic related to my pictures. I also took the advantages and advice from my peers and revised the paper. We all took turns reading our stories, and gave each other helpful advice that would change our writing for the better.

 

4.       I would say for this paper no one contributed any success towards the paper. I feel this way because it was more up to me to show the topic I was talking about with the arguments stating two different sides. I had to analyze my picture to explain my topic better. I would say my peers just gave me advice to fix the paper and to change the topic so they could understand what I was trying to say.

 

5.       I have learned from myself as a writer that my writing may not always be perfect. My writing may not always end up the way I intended it to be or sound. I notice if I take my time and have patience with my writing then I can become a better writer for myself and my future of writing.  I have learned others writing styles, and how they express their ideas in a different way, which makes it easier for me to see the assignments, and know how to do them.

 

6.       The hardest part of this paper was finding pictures that connected with my idea. It is really hard to try to find two arguments in a picture that relates to a certain topic you’re writing about. The easiest part of this paper I would say was typing and analyzing the pictures because we practiced that in class plenty of times.  I would say I took risks my trying to put things in my own terms instead of paraphrasing or looking something’s up. I wanted to express my ideas from the pictures in a way I seen them and thought of them. I didn’t want no one’s opinions on this paper but myself.

 

7.       The part that I am most proud of would be the beginning of the paper. I think I did a really good job explaining my topic, and two main arguments within my topic. I think this because I really took my time trying to get a catchy attention that keeps the readers minder wondering what and how I’m going to talk about the topic I did.

 

8.       I really don’t think my paper needs more improving. Well I reread my paper over and over to see if I could catch any mistakes but I didn’t see any besides the ones I already fixed. I think maybe if I had more eyes which I don’t to help me pick up things I didn’t see before would be much of a help. I think I could of elaborated a little bit more on the explanation of the picture but I just didn’t know how without staying on track. I reread my paper for the last time and added and deleted some words or sentences I thought didn’t make sense before I turned my paper in.

 

9.       My writing process consisted of taking notes in class on what to do. Also practicing what a possible topic would be for me to write about to get the hang of analyzing pictures on a specific topic. I typed up 4 different drafts, until crumbling up wads of ink and words on paper got on my nerves. I typed up my final draft and picked new pictures to analyze. I typed up anther draft until this last one satisfied me.  I felt like I really understood this paper realty well and got my point across by making sense.