1.
The advice I received from each member in my group would
be:
·
Andrew: My writing along with everyone else’s has improved
because he looked back in the beginning when we first started writing, which wasn’t
that well at all. I just needed to add some more, expand someone on my topic.
·
Abby: I think you did very well. Everything was good; your
writing has changed so much. Just check over some spelling and correct a few
things. She asked me if I was doing Rogeian style which, I said yes and it made
me feel like I was on top of what I was supposed to me doing the correct style.
·
Kendall: Everything is pretty. She also gave me good suggestions
about the focus of my topic. How schools kill creativity.
2.
I would say all of their advice was most
helpful, because when I take all these suggestions and listen to them carefully
it helps me fix errors that I may have skipped or not seen before. So I would
say everyone’s advice was most helpful.
3.
I don’t really know much of advice that was
least helpful, Kendall didn’t say much about my paper but, I didn’t say much
about hers either, because I felt like she covered everything about her topic.
4.
I feel like for this paper I have some revision to
do but not much. I feel like I should change and add some more stuff to my
paper, but I really feel like I focused a lot on my Rogerian dialogue which made
it easier to write this paper. I will change some of my sentences, take out
words that don’t make sense, add some more quotes, and use some more of my
sources. Also I am going to just add and remove words, grammar and punctuation.
Other than that I feel like I don’t have much revision to because I worked really
hard, and pushed myself as a writer. I am going to add some transiton words in my paper as well.
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